After consideration, I think you need to rethink the tension between the two stories. One guy seems to be obsessed with getting a burger, while the other story doesn't really seem to create any kind of tension or conflict to the story. What can you add to the story to develop the story?
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After consideration, I think you need to rethink the tension between the two stories. One guy seems to be obsessed with getting a burger, while the other story doesn't really seem to create any kind of tension or conflict to the story. What can you add to the story to develop the story?
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